d736913193d 发表于 2017-11-30 08:39   全显示 1楼
看了这篇迷糊妈妈，我特意去翻了翻别的，感觉风格一样对啪啪啪都没有过多细致的描写，我觉得这方面可以加强下。
下一期如果还是写堂哥的话，个人建议可以妈妈和伯母一起调教，场景也可以增加，不要老是在家里，什么商场、电影院、泳池等等。还有堂哥一家不是快回家了，主角一家也到那边去旅游啊，顺便催眠调教下。
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