陈航宇 发表于 2022-5-29 01:37   全显示 1楼
写的不错，这一章虽然没有肉戏，但是把一些疑惑点，包括妈妈的内心世界都写出来了。然后母子之间的心结打开，感情进步一步升华。妈妈为了家庭可以牺牲到何种程度？后面和林老师竞争又会付出什么样的代价？父亲的异常又会引出什么样的剧情？这些铺垫在这一章里都写到了。让人愈发期待，加油更新
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  • 逍遥夢 金币 +6 认真回复，奖励！ 2022-5-29 08:37
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