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[绿意盎然] 【绿奴儿子将全家送给黑人】第1章

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感觉情节太快了，建议可以增加些细节，通过男主从侧面慢慢了解美母是怎么慢慢沦陷的，在教学过程中通过从浅到深慢慢的试探，时不时露出黑大家伙诱惑美母，刺激她的情绪，从试探摸臀部，碰胸部，几把露出来后与美母有亲密接触，最后再加个绿奴儿的助攻，来个本垒打，这样篇幅长，又能撩拨心弦
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