HairyChest 发表于 2022-12-29 12:15   全显示 1楼
刚拜读完这一系列的作品，十分欣喜。原文在我看来有十分出彩的优点，人物内心的描绘细腻非常，在理智和情欲中，百转千回欲拒还迎，字里行间便让人心神荡漾。可惜结构松散，字不成文，文不成书，故事一篇又一篇，往往刚刚渐入佳境便无以为继，实在是一大遗憾。
有幸作者能续上一笔，而且补充了原书的缺陷，万分感谢。可惜本作更像是一出电视剧，重剧情轻心理，有了完整的故事，也少了原文那几位女性进退失据的心路变化。倘若后续中能在这一点上再加笔墨，不胜之喜。
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