SANMAkote 发表于 2023-1-6 22:44   全显示 1楼
很不错，看的人热血沸腾，可惜苦主的戏份太少了，而且女主人设太过淫荡反而少了点反差，我倒是希望女主是个闷骚的母猪，表面上装作清纯，背地里天天幻想公公用大鸡吧爆炒她，然后在写点半夜偷偷去公公房间偷看鸡吧，给装睡的公公口交之类的，这样感觉会更刺激。
肉戏写的真不错，全程第一视角让读者有种背德感，还有就是公公的描写太少了，看下来只知道公公有个大棒，但是没有别的印象了。
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