tx34303834721 发表于 2023-8-8 17:10   全显示 1楼
剧情铺垫的还算可以，但是没有写到女主相关的剧情，没有交代出关于女主对不起男主的剧情，也没有铺垫出需要复仇反杀的剧情，只能说这安排的女角色，只是一道开胃菜吧，没有展示出完整的剧情内容，也没有看到符合标题的剧情，这字数还是太少了，给人一种戛然而止的感觉，期待一下后续吧
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